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deci
o poezie
sa nu radeti
prea mult
Am iesit afara, e intuneric
Din strada se aude un tipat isteric,
In zare vad o lumina de gheata
E singura care ma mai tine in viata
In jurul meu e un negru sangeriu
Sunt innecata intr-un abis pustiu,
Plina de suferinta si durere
Sunt doar un suflet fara putere.
Sunt tintuita degeaba intr-o lume
In care doar durerea lasa urme
Sunt doar o papusa de portelan
Cu sentimentele aruncate in van
am gasit mai demult primele 2 versuri intr-un fic nush pe unde sh mi-a venit ideea poeziei
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ultimele 2 strofe sunt tri rau de tot  si prima de faina.Dar ultimele 2 sunt suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper:X
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I've found that when you want to know the truth about someone that someone is probably the last person you should ask.
Welcome to the world. Everyone's different, everyone gets treated different. You try fighting that, you end up dying of TB. It's a basic truth of the human condition that everybody lies. The only variable is about what.
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Bah.. ce misto poezie!!! Chiar te pricepi de minune!!Mai vreau!Mai vreau!
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Born to be someone special-ttebayo!
Born to shine and to protect everything that is important.
+ RESPECTAŢI REGULILE! +
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voi vorbiti serios???
O_o o_O
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Da mah.Eu de exemplu am probleme cu descrierea.Naratinuea mai merge.Sunt buna la ceva dialoguri.Tu foarte bine ai descris in poezie,deci e bestiala!Ma vrem,Eminescu!
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Born to be someone special-ttebayo!
Born to shine and to protect everything that is important.
+ RESPECTAŢI REGULILE! +
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deci
inca una
Ma uit la cer,la sore
Inima ma doare
O ultima privire
De dezamagire
Nu am de ce sa stau pe pamant
Imi voi lasa sufletul purtat de vant
Si cu o lovitura se va termina
Toata viata mea
Un pumnal ascutit
Sange de durere innegrit
Un alt suflet a pierit
Ce sfarsit "fericit"
stiu ca e jalnica
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este superba Aleex:X
iti dau un mic sfat:P
la a 2-a strofa " Si cu o lovitura se va termina Viata mea" poti sa scrii " Toata viata mea" sa fie mai lunga..Ca e prea scurta in comparatie cu penultima
deci esti ff talentata :* As vrea si eo sa scriu cv poezii..Un sfat please  da-mi un exemplu de tema..sau ceva..Uh cum faci?
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I've found that when you want to know the truth about someone that someone is probably the last person you should ask.
Welcome to the world. Everyone's different, everyone gets treated different. You try fighting that, you end up dying of TB. It's a basic truth of the human condition that everybody lies. The only variable is about what.
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Daaa!!! :X :X ESTI SUPERBA!!!! Ce poezii strasnic!!!Mor dupa poeziile tale!!!! MAI PUNE!!!!
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Born to be someone special-ttebayo!
Born to shine and to protect everything that is important.
+ RESPECTAŢI REGULILE! +
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gata iuly am modificat
suna mai bine asa
chiar va plac??
 wow cate complimente jk ,iuly roshesc
sunt iar in shoc
deci
iuly eu de obicei fac poezii despre chestii triste *nush de ce*
de obicei despre viata sh moarte
poi sfaturi
nush
scrie cum iti dicteaza inima
tre sa iasa ceva
bun
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La mine tot mai mult scriu despre ceva rau.. eh.. nici nu mai tin minte cand am scris ultima data o poezie.La mine`s foarte simple! :-j
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Born to be someone special-ttebayo!
Born to shine and to protect everything that is important.
+ RESPECTAŢI REGULILE! +
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thx de sfat De unde-ti vin ideile de incepere?
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I've found that when you want to know the truth about someone that someone is probably the last person you should ask.
Welcome to the world. Everyone's different, everyone gets treated different. You try fighting that, you end up dying of TB. It's a basic truth of the human condition that everybody lies. The only variable is about what.
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hmm
nush pe bune
pur sh simplu vin
Resemnare
poezie noua
Sa traiesti
fara sa fi inteles
Sa traiesti
fara sa ai de ales
Sa plangi
fara sa te opresti
Sa fugi
Fara sa te gandesti
La cine esti
La ce-ti doresti
De la viata...
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Omg
cand ma uit la poeziile tale..
ma oftic.Sa mor eo de no
St att de cool
ff frumoasa
mai pune 
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I've found that when you want to know the truth about someone that someone is probably the last person you should ask.
Welcome to the world. Everyone's different, everyone gets treated different. You try fighting that, you end up dying of TB. It's a basic truth of the human condition that everybody lies. The only variable is about what.
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sa te oftici?
frumoase?
sunt in shoc
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Mica si frumoasa!! Belea!!! Mai pune!!
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Born to be someone special-ttebayo!
Born to shine and to protect everything that is important.
+ RESPECTAŢI REGULILE! +
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